I woke up back in the Academy, my stars burning hotter than ever. I winced, hissing slightly, my fingers going to them like they always did when I did something stupid. I sat up, propping myself up on one hand.
Tsuki!
I looked around, hoping it wasn't a dream. She was just coming around next to me, on a couch across the coffee table from me. I flung myself over it as she rubbed her head.
"TSUKI!" I screamed, tackling her. Her eyes went wide as I flung my arms around her neck. "I"VE MISSED YOU SO MUCH!"
(your turn)
Sunday, October 11, 2009
Friday, June 19, 2009
Chapter 3: Hoshi P.O.V.
I looked over at Tsuki.
"Hey," I whispered, "I was just about to sneak out and look for you."
The teacher looked over at us, playfully glaring at me. Noda-Sensei always did that. No one else glares at me. Mainly because half the time, they couldn't see me makign stupid faces at them (don't tell Tsuki -I do it to her when i'm mad -Shh!).
When I found my sister (bumped into her, more like) in Tokyo, I was surprised I hadn't noticed someone comign towards me. I was trying to escape, not be caught.
I walked down the Tokyo sidewalk, keeping my eyes out for Narumi-Sensei or any other Alice Academy teacher that would be looking for me. I figured that they wouldn't go that far from the Academy, since it would draw attention. As I was looking around, invisible of course, someone bumped into me. Or, so I thought. When I looked up, no one was there. Then I looked down, I was visible!
"What the heck?!" I cried, startled.
"You're telling me! Where'd I go?" A voice said, I was getting totally creeped out!
"Where are you? What the heck is going on?!"
"H-hoshi?" The voice asked. I looked from side to side.
"U-uh...."
"HOSHI!!!" Invisible arms hung around my neck, and before I knew it, there was a girl on top of me. She looked just like Tsuki, only older, but the same, somehow....
"TSUKI!!!" I screamed.
"Time to go back to the Academy, Hoshi Rayuzaki." Someone said. Green eyes and medium length blonde hair bent over me, upside down to me. Tsuki looked up, then passed out.
It didn't take me long, either.
"Hey," I whispered, "I was just about to sneak out and look for you."
The teacher looked over at us, playfully glaring at me. Noda-Sensei always did that. No one else glares at me. Mainly because half the time, they couldn't see me makign stupid faces at them (don't tell Tsuki -I do it to her when i'm mad -Shh!).
When I found my sister (bumped into her, more like) in Tokyo, I was surprised I hadn't noticed someone comign towards me. I was trying to escape, not be caught.
I walked down the Tokyo sidewalk, keeping my eyes out for Narumi-Sensei or any other Alice Academy teacher that would be looking for me. I figured that they wouldn't go that far from the Academy, since it would draw attention. As I was looking around, invisible of course, someone bumped into me. Or, so I thought. When I looked up, no one was there. Then I looked down, I was visible!
"What the heck?!" I cried, startled.
"You're telling me! Where'd I go?" A voice said, I was getting totally creeped out!
"Where are you? What the heck is going on?!"
"H-hoshi?" The voice asked. I looked from side to side.
"U-uh...."
"HOSHI!!!" Invisible arms hung around my neck, and before I knew it, there was a girl on top of me. She looked just like Tsuki, only older, but the same, somehow....
"TSUKI!!!" I screamed.
"Time to go back to the Academy, Hoshi Rayuzaki." Someone said. Green eyes and medium length blonde hair bent over me, upside down to me. Tsuki looked up, then passed out.
It didn't take me long, either.
Monday, June 15, 2009
NOTE
My hair IS NOT red it is brown!!! Sorry for the confusion but it is a reddish-brown!!!
Sorry had to get that out.
Sorry had to get that out.
Sunday, June 14, 2009
Chapter 2: Tsuki's Enterance

This picture is ME! (Tsuki Rayuzaki) And this is my enterance to the story. I know Hoshi told you her story, well, it's my turn. (We decided we'd switch off point of views every chapter.) It all started at five years old, when my sister was taken from me by the Alice people. That had to be thw worst day of my life. Weirdly, that's not where my story begins. In fact, mine starts when I was thirteen years old.
"Okaa-San, why doesn't she come back?" I asked my mother, who was setting the table for supper. (Okaa-san means mother.)
"Who?" Okaa-San asked, taking a break to sit next to me.
"Hoshi-Chan. She's never come back, after eight years, she hasn't called, or visited. Not even during the holidays." I looked down, "not even on our birthday." Okaa-San sat quiet for a few moments, a look of deep concentration on her face.
"Musume," She said quietly (Musume means daughter), "Hoshi-Chan is all the way in Tokyo. It must be hard to visit us all the way here in Osaka."
"She never calls, either. That would be easy. She's never even written one letter to me. Even though she promised, she promised eight years ago that she would write to me. Everyday."
"Musume..." Okaa-San said, "I think you've had enough. It's time you knew." I looked over at my Okaa-San to see her looking very concerned. She'd been hiding something from me. Something important.
"What is it?" I asked.
"Hoshi-Chan went to the Alice Academy, it's a school for children with special powers. You remember, don't you? When Hoshi-Chan would disappear randomly, and we would look everywhere for her, then end up right next to you."
"I remember," I said, letting it all process, "so Hoshi-Chan has a special power...to be invisible?"
"Yes," Mother replied, relieved at how calm I was being about all this, "She had an Alice, that's why they took her away from us. She needed to be taught how to use that Alice. That's what that school is for. But once they've entered the Academy, it becomes dangerous for them. So they can have no contact with the outside world. She's not allowed to ever visit, call, or even write letters to us."
My eyes went wide. I couldn't believe it. I shot up. I was never going to see my sister until she graduated? That couldn't be. I wouldn't allow it!
"Okaa-San! You must be lying!" I shouted, tears rolling down my cheeks.
"Musume..." She said, touching my cheeks with her warm, loving hands, "if I was lying, she would've written to you. Everyday."
I couldn't take it. This Alice Academy sounded like a horrible place to me. How could they do that to those children? It's disgusting! I ran out the door, I wouldn't allow it. I would rescue her, I would rescue Hoshi from that awful place. I had to get to Tokyo.
I returned home that evening, I told Okaa-San and Dou-San (father) my plan. They said they knew this day would eventually come, and I was sent on my way to Tokyo, to find and rescue my sister from Alice Academy.
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That was two years ago, now I'm fifteen, and am a member of the Alice Academy. I had only been here two years, but I already knew what I wanted.
"Narumi-Sensei!" I called down the hall to the elementary school teacher. He looked back at me and smiled.
"Hello, Tsuki-Chan. What do you need?"
"I was just looking for Hoshi-Chan. It's hard to find an invisible girl, ya know." I said, smiling the best I could.
"I believe she'd be in class now. The group classes are starting."
It hit me, I was going to be late for S.A. class...again.
"CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!" I shouted, running toward the class. I entered slowly, and ran into my seat.
"Sorry I'm late, Onee-Chan." I said to Hoshi sitting in the seat next to her, "I ran into Naru-Sensei and then...well, you know."
P.S. I have the Mirror Alice. Any Alice a person (near me or against me) I can use it as well. Like a mirror and it's reflection.
"Okaa-San, why doesn't she come back?" I asked my mother, who was setting the table for supper. (Okaa-san means mother.)
"Who?" Okaa-San asked, taking a break to sit next to me.
"Hoshi-Chan. She's never come back, after eight years, she hasn't called, or visited. Not even during the holidays." I looked down, "not even on our birthday." Okaa-San sat quiet for a few moments, a look of deep concentration on her face.
"Musume," She said quietly (Musume means daughter), "Hoshi-Chan is all the way in Tokyo. It must be hard to visit us all the way here in Osaka."
"She never calls, either. That would be easy. She's never even written one letter to me. Even though she promised, she promised eight years ago that she would write to me. Everyday."
"Musume..." Okaa-San said, "I think you've had enough. It's time you knew." I looked over at my Okaa-San to see her looking very concerned. She'd been hiding something from me. Something important.
"What is it?" I asked.
"Hoshi-Chan went to the Alice Academy, it's a school for children with special powers. You remember, don't you? When Hoshi-Chan would disappear randomly, and we would look everywhere for her, then end up right next to you."
"I remember," I said, letting it all process, "so Hoshi-Chan has a special power...to be invisible?"
"Yes," Mother replied, relieved at how calm I was being about all this, "She had an Alice, that's why they took her away from us. She needed to be taught how to use that Alice. That's what that school is for. But once they've entered the Academy, it becomes dangerous for them. So they can have no contact with the outside world. She's not allowed to ever visit, call, or even write letters to us."
My eyes went wide. I couldn't believe it. I shot up. I was never going to see my sister until she graduated? That couldn't be. I wouldn't allow it!
"Okaa-San! You must be lying!" I shouted, tears rolling down my cheeks.
"Musume..." She said, touching my cheeks with her warm, loving hands, "if I was lying, she would've written to you. Everyday."
I couldn't take it. This Alice Academy sounded like a horrible place to me. How could they do that to those children? It's disgusting! I ran out the door, I wouldn't allow it. I would rescue her, I would rescue Hoshi from that awful place. I had to get to Tokyo.
I returned home that evening, I told Okaa-San and Dou-San (father) my plan. They said they knew this day would eventually come, and I was sent on my way to Tokyo, to find and rescue my sister from Alice Academy.
<><><>
That was two years ago, now I'm fifteen, and am a member of the Alice Academy. I had only been here two years, but I already knew what I wanted.
"Narumi-Sensei!" I called down the hall to the elementary school teacher. He looked back at me and smiled.
"Hello, Tsuki-Chan. What do you need?"
"I was just looking for Hoshi-Chan. It's hard to find an invisible girl, ya know." I said, smiling the best I could.
"I believe she'd be in class now. The group classes are starting."
It hit me, I was going to be late for S.A. class...again.
"CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!" I shouted, running toward the class. I entered slowly, and ran into my seat.
"Sorry I'm late, Onee-Chan." I said to Hoshi sitting in the seat next to her, "I ran into Naru-Sensei and then...well, you know."
P.S. I have the Mirror Alice. Any Alice a person (near me or against me) I can use it as well. Like a mirror and it's reflection.
Thursday, June 11, 2009
Chapter 1: Hoshi's Enterance

The picture above is me, in my comfortable clothes. They are my clothes from home, where I haven't been since I was five years old, since I go to the Alice Academy. The Alice Academy is a school for people with special gifts, powers. They are sorted into five catagories, Active Ability, Predisposition, Technology, S.A. (Special Ability-for the odd ones[but seriously, they're way cooler]), and Dangerous Ability. I'm in the S.A. group, with my sister. I'll start with my, Hoshi's, point of view. My story will start when I was five years old, and I got my Alice.
Tsuki and I were twins (faternal), and the best of friends. When Alice Academy called, I left the money they offered to my family, and I left. It was so hard.
"Hoshi-Chan, I don't want those men to take you away." Tsuki said as we layed beside each other in the darkness. We shared a room.
"I know, Tsuki-Chan, but Mama and Papa need that money."
"Hoshi-Chan! I don't want you to go!" Tsuki-Chan whimpered. Tears started to well in my eyes.
"I don't want to go either." I said. Tsuki rolled over.
"Ts-tsuki-Chan?" I whimpered. Would she not want anything to do with me because the Alice people were coming to take me away? She rolled back over, her teddy bear wrapped in her arms.
"Hoshi-Chan...I want you to have Beary." She said. My eyes went wide.
"Tsuki-Chan, you can't sleep without beary! I can't take him, you won't be able to sleep!"
"It won't matter, I can't sleep without you here, anyway. It'll be too quiet. And...Hoshi-Chan...I want you to come back! I don't want you to leave!" Tsuki sniffled. I gave her a hug.
"Tsuki-Chan, I want you to have Snowy," I said, pulling my stuffed animal bunny over my shoulder and pushing it into her hands, "If you are giving me beary, I don't want you to forget me." Tsuki's eyes opened wide and were filled with tears.
"Hoshi-Chan..." She whispered. I reached over and brushed the hair out of her face.
"It's okay, I'll write to you. Everyday."
"But you leave tomorrow!" Tsuki cried.
"I know, Tsuki-Chan. Let's go to sleep now."
"No! I want to stay up all night with you! It's the last night I'll see you till Christmas."
"Tsuki-Chan, the Alice people probably won't be happy if iI'm tired in the morning." I said. Tsuki sniffed and wiped her eyes.
"I know," She sniffed, "but I'm really going to miss you!"
"Tsuki-Chan..." I breathed, trying not to cry. I had to be strong for my Onee-Chan (Onee-Chan means sister or for a close sister-like figure.)
"I'll miss you, too."
That next morning was the worst morning of my life. My parents and Onee-Chan were very upset. Tears fell from me, too, and I cried harder when Tsuki clung to me. But when the Alice people had had enough, they took me into their black car, and I watched out the back window as my family dissapeared.
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Now, I'm fifteen, and I'm in the middle school division of the Alice Academy. There are certain forms of containment for Alice use if the person is bad, like the star Tsubasa-Andou-Kun has, well, I have two. Ever since I'd been taken from my family, I've been trying to escape. This place was like a prison to me. It wasn't fair that they just took me like that. Even the mother robot wasn't any help. She just yelled and told me to keep my room clean. There was something strange about it, though. My Alice, I mean. I wasn't that great of a student -I always got into trouble, but I always kept good grades -and somehow I have a special star. Even though I've kept good grades for the ten years I've called this place home, I've never gotten to see my parents or sister since the day the Alice people took me away. I was taken when I was five; when I turned thirteen, I got one of the biggest surprises of my life. They found out Tsuki had an Alice! We were both classified in the S.A. types, and we were very close. Harada Misaki was one of my best friends; she had been my friend through elementary, and she is only a year ahead of me. Now I'm fifteen and Tsuki and I are closer than ever, since we were denied the time to spend our childhood together.
Oh yeah! I almost forgot to tell you my Alice, I can turn invisible.
You must be wondering why I have two stars on my left cheek. When I first came here, it was almost easy to escape the first time. I actually almost made it home. When I was returned, I was punished, and given one star. This star didn't work very well, you see, because for some reason I could tolerate the shocks it gave me when I was invisible. So when they caught me the second time, they gave me another star. That one stopped me, because when activated, the pain made me loose my breathe and I would fall to the ground. Some say this is cruel; I'm one of them. That's just not right! Anyway, when one of the teachers (Narumi) found out what the second star did, he had the chairman make the power level go down so that I wouldn't fall over evertime it was activated. Narumi was almost like an older brother to me, but he wasn't exactly like one. He always helped me, but so did my friends. My friends were the ones in the S.A. class. They were, in many ways, my family. But not the same.
Tsuki and I were twins (faternal), and the best of friends. When Alice Academy called, I left the money they offered to my family, and I left. It was so hard.
"Hoshi-Chan, I don't want those men to take you away." Tsuki said as we layed beside each other in the darkness. We shared a room.
"I know, Tsuki-Chan, but Mama and Papa need that money."
"Hoshi-Chan! I don't want you to go!" Tsuki-Chan whimpered. Tears started to well in my eyes.
"I don't want to go either." I said. Tsuki rolled over.
"Ts-tsuki-Chan?" I whimpered. Would she not want anything to do with me because the Alice people were coming to take me away? She rolled back over, her teddy bear wrapped in her arms.
"Hoshi-Chan...I want you to have Beary." She said. My eyes went wide.
"Tsuki-Chan, you can't sleep without beary! I can't take him, you won't be able to sleep!"
"It won't matter, I can't sleep without you here, anyway. It'll be too quiet. And...Hoshi-Chan...I want you to come back! I don't want you to leave!" Tsuki sniffled. I gave her a hug.
"Tsuki-Chan, I want you to have Snowy," I said, pulling my stuffed animal bunny over my shoulder and pushing it into her hands, "If you are giving me beary, I don't want you to forget me." Tsuki's eyes opened wide and were filled with tears.
"Hoshi-Chan..." She whispered. I reached over and brushed the hair out of her face.
"It's okay, I'll write to you. Everyday."
"But you leave tomorrow!" Tsuki cried.
"I know, Tsuki-Chan. Let's go to sleep now."
"No! I want to stay up all night with you! It's the last night I'll see you till Christmas."
"Tsuki-Chan, the Alice people probably won't be happy if iI'm tired in the morning." I said. Tsuki sniffed and wiped her eyes.
"I know," She sniffed, "but I'm really going to miss you!"
"Tsuki-Chan..." I breathed, trying not to cry. I had to be strong for my Onee-Chan (Onee-Chan means sister or for a close sister-like figure.)
"I'll miss you, too."
That next morning was the worst morning of my life. My parents and Onee-Chan were very upset. Tears fell from me, too, and I cried harder when Tsuki clung to me. But when the Alice people had had enough, they took me into their black car, and I watched out the back window as my family dissapeared.
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Now, I'm fifteen, and I'm in the middle school division of the Alice Academy. There are certain forms of containment for Alice use if the person is bad, like the star Tsubasa-Andou-Kun has, well, I have two. Ever since I'd been taken from my family, I've been trying to escape. This place was like a prison to me. It wasn't fair that they just took me like that. Even the mother robot wasn't any help. She just yelled and told me to keep my room clean. There was something strange about it, though. My Alice, I mean. I wasn't that great of a student -I always got into trouble, but I always kept good grades -and somehow I have a special star. Even though I've kept good grades for the ten years I've called this place home, I've never gotten to see my parents or sister since the day the Alice people took me away. I was taken when I was five; when I turned thirteen, I got one of the biggest surprises of my life. They found out Tsuki had an Alice! We were both classified in the S.A. types, and we were very close. Harada Misaki was one of my best friends; she had been my friend through elementary, and she is only a year ahead of me. Now I'm fifteen and Tsuki and I are closer than ever, since we were denied the time to spend our childhood together.
Oh yeah! I almost forgot to tell you my Alice, I can turn invisible.
You must be wondering why I have two stars on my left cheek. When I first came here, it was almost easy to escape the first time. I actually almost made it home. When I was returned, I was punished, and given one star. This star didn't work very well, you see, because for some reason I could tolerate the shocks it gave me when I was invisible. So when they caught me the second time, they gave me another star. That one stopped me, because when activated, the pain made me loose my breathe and I would fall to the ground. Some say this is cruel; I'm one of them. That's just not right! Anyway, when one of the teachers (Narumi) found out what the second star did, he had the chairman make the power level go down so that I wouldn't fall over evertime it was activated. Narumi was almost like an older brother to me, but he wasn't exactly like one. He always helped me, but so did my friends. My friends were the ones in the S.A. class. They were, in many ways, my family. But not the same.
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